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Re: Ok more effort [message #435137 is a reply to message #435109]

Fri, 20 August 2010 11:25

Ryu
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Registered: September 2006
Location: Liverpool, England.

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The sounds and shit you use are alright.

Your knowledge on rhythm and timing is awful.

You need to learn these two concepts before releasing anything else. Plus the fact you seem to be lacking a bass riff, or any bass at all. remember, everyone grooves to the beat of the bass.

Listen to these House tracks, and compare them to yours
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=iG31qwDueW4
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Pa7xEsFWpE8

Notice the tempo and how everything gradually comes together. I'm not saying you need a vocalist or anything but musically wise your all over the place.

Presence is a curious thing, if you think you need to prove it... you probably never had it in the first place.

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		Ok more effort By: renalpha on Fri, 20 August 2010 06:39
		Re: Ok more effort By: reborn on Fri, 20 August 2010 07:07
		Re: Ok more effort By: SSADMVR on Fri, 20 August 2010 07:54
		Re: Ok more effort By: Sir Kane on Sat, 21 August 2010 10:10
		Re: Ok more effort By: Dover on Fri, 20 August 2010 08:43
		Re: Ok more effort By: DRNG on Fri, 20 August 2010 18:56
		Re: Ok more effort By: Ryu on Fri, 20 August 2010 11:25
		Re: Ok more effort By: Herr Surth on Sat, 21 August 2010 10:20

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