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			| Red Alert: A Path Beyond's Ore Silo [message #126807] | Thu, 16 December 2004 03:19   |  
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					|  flyingfox Messages: 1612
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	| S'alright. In the little image though, the pipe goes down and through the base concrete ellipse. In yours it seems to stop at the concrete (unless you have another side image of it). 
 The ladder looks like it should be closer to the metal squares on the side.
 
 Also the shades of green camo in the smaller pic are darker when nearer the ladder and metal square side, but brighter nearer the middle. Not to mention those yellowish strips seem to go around the base in an upwards continuous pattern (small pic).
 
 Theoretically, might the silo be built in an area with some trees all around it, you know, to help the camoflauge effect?
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			| Red Alert: A Path Beyond's Ore Silo [message #126889] | Thu, 16 December 2004 13:18   |  
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				|  |  rm5248 Messages: 1156
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	| | Aircraftkiller |  | Sorry, but no, it doesn't.
 
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 Can you not take criticism of your work?
 
 I think that the green is a bit too light.
 
 w00t?
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			| Red Alert: A Path Beyond's Ore Silo [message #126928] | Thu, 16 December 2004 17:35   |  
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				|  |  Toolstyle Messages: 215
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	| That actual reply was to somebody saying it was cartoony not looking "ass". It does look a bit cartoony, maybe darkening it a tad would improve it. 
 
 | Aircraftkiller |  | That's irrelevant to this thread.
 
 Common fallacies of logic and rhetoric:
 Ad hominem - attacking the arguer and not the argument.
 
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