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DISCUSS: The Scorpion's Tale [message #100513] Thu, 08 July 2004 18:07 Go to previous messageGo to next message
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Owwww . . . . it's to short, ohh well, Still an excelent story Kirby.

DISCUSS: The Scorpion's Tale [message #100562] Fri, 09 July 2004 03:34 Go to previous messageGo to next message
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DISCUSS: The Scorpion's Tale [message #100565] Fri, 09 July 2004 04:50 Go to previous messageGo to next message
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Owwww . . . . it's to short, ohh well, Still an excelent story Kirby.


I figured short was better than nothing. I have been swamped with meetings etc at work lately. I will get a good sized chunk out there today.


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DISCUSS: The Scorpion's Tale [message #100645] Fri, 09 July 2004 13:49 Go to previous messageGo to next message
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Cool, this should be an interesting battle . . .
I just can't wait untill the next part of this story.


DISCUSS: The Scorpion's Tale [message #100698] Fri, 09 July 2004 21:51 Go to previous messageGo to next message
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w00t paintball, how fun!

hmmm a sniper on the roof, waiting for his victims.


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DISCUSS: The Scorpion's Tale [message #100716] Sat, 10 July 2004 00:16 Go to previous messageGo to next message
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Damn you Kirby I am addicted to this story Razz Very Happy
DISCUSS: The Scorpion's Tale [message #100719] Sat, 10 July 2004 00:44 Go to previous messageGo to next message
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need more
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DISCUSS: The Scorpion's Tale [message #100774] Sat, 10 July 2004 11:21 Go to previous messageGo to next message
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Yes its really good it needs to be published when youre finished.

DISCUSS: The Scorpion's Tale [message #100933] Sun, 11 July 2004 18:21 Go to previous messageGo to next message
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That would have been a complete sentence had you put a period at the end.
DISCUSS: The Scorpion's Tale [message #100954] Sun, 11 July 2004 20:27 Go to previous messageGo to next message
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Still wrong . . . the I is not capitalized. I is always supposed to be capitalized when referring to yourself. Also the letter at the beggining of a sentence is suposed the be capitalized.

DISCUSS: The Scorpion's Tale [message #101021] Mon, 12 July 2004 07:04 Go to previous messageGo to next message
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Must read more...
DISCUSS: The Scorpion's Tale [message #101024] Mon, 12 July 2004 07:12 Go to previous messageGo to next message
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When you're done make a new GDI story and call it The Eagle's Tale. Razz

w00t?
DISCUSS: The Scorpion's Tale [message #101139] Mon, 12 July 2004 16:52 Go to previous messageGo to next message
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Kirby if you have time can you put this thing into a PDF so we can read it without all the crap in between.

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DISCUSS: The Scorpion's Tale [message #101149] Mon, 12 July 2004 18:13 Go to previous messageGo to next message
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I will actually be putting the entire thing on my website, as well as updating it as Kirby updates the story so those who want to, can read the story without having to sift through the rest of the thread to find it. It will be completed later tonight or tomorrow at the latest. I will post here when I am finished.

DISCUSS: The Scorpion's Tale [message #101160] Mon, 12 July 2004 21:19 Go to previous messageGo to next message
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**Sorry, Dbl Post**

I have finished my section for Kirby's story on my site. It is located here:

The Scorpion's Tale

It is up-to-date with all segments as of right now, and will be updated as needed.

Thank you Kirby for giving permission to do so.


DISCUSS: The Scorpion's Tale [message #101188] Tue, 13 July 2004 05:34 Go to previous messageGo to next message
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perfect. lol the bubba 4000 Very Happy funneh, but it is great, he won, but now he has to pass this test with trained pros. battling it out and attempting to make it back.

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DISCUSS: The Scorpion's Tale [message #101224] Tue, 13 July 2004 10:06 Go to previous messageGo to next message
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LOL the last post had me laughing. I could picture it all going down in my head.

This whole story is great. I don't read the word, I see the story. I haven't had a reaction like that to a story in almost 20 years (Enders Game).


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DISCUSS: The Scorpion's Tale [message #101279] Tue, 13 July 2004 15:53 Go to previous messageGo to next message
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He pried it open using the bubba-matic 4000 crowbar


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DISCUSS: The Scorpion's Tale [message #101292] Tue, 13 July 2004 17:18 Go to previous messageGo to next message
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If you keep writing like this you could publish it you just need EA's ok.

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DISCUSS: The Scorpion's Tale [message #101321] Tue, 13 July 2004 21:17 Go to previous messageGo to next message
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this is a badass story, how much eduacation do you have?

DISCUSS: The Scorpion's Tale [message #101331] Wed, 14 July 2004 01:43 Go to previous messageGo to next message
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awosme.

how crap would the BH dude feel, he wuold get punished the most becaus ehe fell first to a recruit. BTW, paintball rocks!


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DISCUSS: The Scorpion's Tale [message #101402] Wed, 14 July 2004 10:20 Go to previous messageGo to next message
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awosme.

how crap would the BH dude feel, he wuold get punished the most becaus ehe fell first to a recruit. BTW, paintball rocks!


Judging by your grammar you are either drunk or really tired.


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DISCUSS: The Scorpion's Tale [message #101478] Wed, 14 July 2004 16:38 Go to previous messageGo to next message
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Hmm... do I smell a ambush? Smile
DISCUSS: The Scorpion's Tale [message #101800] Thu, 15 July 2004 20:20 Go to previous messageGo to next message
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Ohhhh man, I thought he was gonna win this one. Ohh well, nice job. Smile Keep up the marvelous work Kirby.

DISCUSS: The Scorpion's Tale [message #101833] Thu, 15 July 2004 22:01 Go to previous messageGo to previous message
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